Saturday, April 6, 2019

NaPoWriMo 2019, Day 6

Today's prompt is to write a poem of what is possible, the power of if.  Well, I started to do that in my mind and got completely off track, which led to this instead.

Elegy

It is useless
when I stand at your grave
to try to feel your essence
in the wind,
as though your ghost
lingered among the grass
and trees,

useless
to listen for your voice
in the songs of birds
simply defending
their territory
or calling for mates,

useless
to seek your spirit
in places we used to go,
for those restaurants,
stores, and
movie theaters
aren't there anymore.

Only through music
can I reach you.
The songs you loved
playing in the car
as I speed down
the highway
make me aware
0f your presence
as though you were
in the seat beside me. - Jeff Barnes


Friday, April 5, 2019

NaPoWriMo 2019, Day 5

The prompt for day is to write a poem that incorporates at least one of the following:

1. the villanelle form

2. lines taken from an outside text

3. phrases that oppose each other in some way

To me, this sounded a lot more difficult than it actually was.  It came pretty easily once I got the idea of what to do, and started writing it.  In fact, it almost wrote itself.  I hope Dylan Thomas isn't spinning in his grave.

Morning Lament
(with apologies to Dylan Thomas)

Do not go gentle into dawn's light.
Nighthawks should burn and rave at the new day.
Rage, rage against the dying of the night.

Nyctophiles know that the night is right.
Would that the darkness could forever stay.
Do not go gentle into dawn's light.

It pains the eyes to see how bright
is the garish sun at the height of the day.
Rage, rage against the dying of the night.

The moon and stars are more subtly bright.
Would that they never had to fade away.
Do not go gentle into dawn's light.

The darkness should never fill you with fright.
Nothing is so soothing as a gentle moon ray.
Rage, rage against the dying of the night.

The gaudy sun in my eyes is a blight.
I long for the stars at the end of the day.
Do not go gentle into dawn's light.
Rage, rage against the dying of the night. -- Jeff Barnes

Thursday, April 4, 2019

NaPoWriMo 2019, Day 4

The prompt today is to write a poem that conveys sadness through simplicity.

Mother in White

She is as white
as the feathers
of a snowy egret

white as the dress
she wore at her wedding

white as the carnations
in the box outside the window

white as the porcelain Buddha
that sits on the shelf

white as the broken shells
of this morning's eggs

white as the crumpled paper
in my wastebasket

white as the bleached bones
in an anatomy lab

white as the sheets of the bed
she will die in. --  Jeff Barnes

Wednesday, April 3, 2019

NaPoWriMo 2019, Day 3

Today's prompt is to write a poem that unfolds over an appreciable length of time.  I am not sure I have a long, meandering poem like that to share at this point, but this little haiku sort of spans years in my mind -- my childhood home, revisited.

Haiku

House I grew up in --
when I walked through it felt like
visiting my grave. - Jeff Barnes

Tuesday, April 2, 2019

NaPoWriMo 2019, Day 2

The prompt today is to write a poem that resists closure by ending on a question.  This doesn't actually have a question as the final line (or any line), but does raise a question, I think.


Old Man

An old man sits
in the park
on a day so blurred
one might not know
if it was morning
or evening.


The wind
ripples puddles,
blows
so comfortably cool
one might not know
if it was spring
or fall.

He takes a handkerchief
from his pocket,
lightly dabs his face.
I can't tell if he's
wiping away rain
or tears. - Jeff Barnes

Monday, April 1, 2019

NaPoWriMo 2019, Day 1

The prompt for today is to write a poem that provides the reader with instructions on how to do something.  Since I don't know how to do anything, here is what I came up with:

How to Write a Surrealist Poem

Start with a fish, but put it
in an unconventional situation,
for instance have it carry a briefcase
while waiting for a train at the station.

Don't allow the train to arrive.
Have the fish met instead
by a giraffe wearing roller skates
with a puffin sitting on its head.

Make the giraffe ask, "Where are you headed?"
and the fish reply, "I'm going to the moon,"
to which the giraffe will say, "Hop on my back"
as the puffin inflates a red balloon.

Let them float up into the sky
until they are well out of sight
and only visible with a telescope
when the moon comes out at night. - Jeff Barnes

Sunday, March 31, 2019

NaPoWrimo 2019 Early Bird

Well, it is almost the start of National Poetry Writing Month -- NaPoWriMo -- in which we write a poem per day for the entire month of April.  An optional prompt is given each day, plus there is an Early Bird Prompt, given on March 31st.  Today's prompt is to write a poetic self portait, in which we portray ourselves in the guise of a figure from history or mythology.  Here is what I came up with.

Portrait of Myself as Vlad the Impaler

After a few hundred years
I grew weary of being remembered
for my cruelty and bloodlust
even though I brought it
upon myself

by impaling my enemies on stakes
on the grounds of my castle,
often taking meals while sitting
in the midst of their squirming,
screaming bodies as they died,
nailing turbans to the heads
of visiting Ottomans when they didn't show
the proper respect,
and performing countless
other acts of malice.


At the time it brought me
orgasmic ecstasy,
and my legend grew
feeding on fear and veneration,
like the Old Testament God.

But these things faded
over centuries.  I was dead
but my hell consisted of memories,
of reliving the horrors 
I had perpetrated

so that I felt some relief
when Mr. Stoker wrote his novel,
transforming me into a supernatural
creature of the night,
living on the blood of victims
because I had no choice.

Such a hell was comparable
to the one I was experiencing,
almost.

But further years softened me
in the minds of millions,
transforming me first into 
an eccentric but lovable
grandfather, a patriarch
to a family of friendly monsters,

and then into a mascot
promoting chocolate flavored cereal
on Saturday mornings,

and finally into a benign,
almost avuncular eccentric
with a passion for numbers 
and a quirky laugh,
whose main vocation in life
was teaching children to count. - Jeff Barnes