Sunday, April 21, 2019

NaPoWriMo 2019, Day 21

Today's prompt is to write a poem that used surreal imagery and dream logic.  I don't know how successful this is, but here it what I came up with.


Cold Easter

In the last days of winter
you emerged from your coma
for an instant,
opened one eye,
looked at our mother,
and stopped breathing.

Snowflakes spotted
the priest's black coat
as he stood by your grave
and said final prayers
before a crow
carried your spirit
away.


We had a cold Easter that year.

Mother lies in bed,
face buried in her hands.
The world around her
does not exist.

Her hair and skin
are as white as
the corridors of death.

I am mindful
of the birds 
coming and going
outside the window.

I have not seen a crow yet
but today is Easter
and it is cold. - Jeff Barnes

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